Hello! my name is Squeakers. The story I'm about to tell you is about how me and my friends gave the poor family down the road the best Christmas present ever. We told them we had arranged their house to be in a TV show called
Extreme House Makeover. They didn't know what to say! When the camera crew arrived to start the show, it was my job to take the house owners Cindy and Bella to the movie theater, the mall, and many other entertaining places like that. While we were out, all the others on our street got prepared to get their paws dirty! When we got home, it was brilliant!!!
Here is the front door.......... Nicely painted!
Here is them looking around their NEW kitchen! Before the makeover, they barley even had a kitchen!
And here is the lounge! There used to be a big hole in the wall and plaster all over the floor. As you can see, that has been taken care of!
And here is the dining area! There used to be a table with three and a half legs and chairs that were too high up.
And here is the master bedroom. There used to be termites all through the whole room!
And here is the kids bedroom! Pretty cool, huh? This place was nothing compared to what it is now! And here is the bathroom! There used to be no toilet! So they had to keep hiring portaloos. 
And when they came to the front porch.........
There was a surprise party in the backyard! So they partied and partied and partied until nightfall. "I don't know how we could ever thank you!" They say, "We are so grateful to have such great friends. I don't know what we'd do without you."
THE END.
1 comments:
That's a great story, couldn't have written a better story if I tried!!!! Love the use of pictures throughout to make the story even more interesting.
Great work!!!!
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